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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Out of darkness. In the first pale reaching hour of cogito ergo sum, I am the slumbering god. My breath, the envy of all who are dead, fills the air with sighs. My head rests against a mountain crest; legs and arms flung out over pillowing hills. One of my sides wakes to feel the cool earth; another aloft in the warm wind. And as I turn, . . . in pleasure, again to being alive, the day begins with the opening of my eye. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely thought, uplifting another good piece |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I dont know why more people dont comment on your words I suppose we always work in cartels or discrimination dave |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I wonder the same, Dave...but I am as guilty as others when it comes to replies sometimes... This is excellent poetry, the subject is covered well and the form is very good... I will try to comment on more of the poems that I read here in the future..especially the good ones such as this.. Good work, John, I enjoyed this poem..... -----------ice ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Glad this one popped back up.. excellent piece of work here John. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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