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Now - by eye
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Now With the dance of who or not will not be with whom Bustling coats taken off but only to someone and in an invisible rook Who sees all and is told nothing eating 'specs' of savour The jumper worn and not worn as night evapourates sexual ploys in Spanish cities in your mind Fragments of frustration, urgency without interest Determining interest directional by eye |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that was confusing! Like standing in a whirwind  or I guess, being caught up in someone else's dance |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
When looked at differently this has something...a mind not at rest..but still very original... Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Fragments of frustration, urgency without interest Determining interest directional by eye hmmm...that says it all to me, Dave...especially the fragments of frustration...I live them every day M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
SEA that was confusing! Like standing in a whirwind or I guess, being caught up in someone else's dance Sea I'll put the reply in a revision of Now - by eye. Goldenrose When looked at differently this has something...a mind not at rest..but still very original... Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) Yes the mind is not at rest unless your rest is others unrest and that is not a personal comment. nakdthoughts Fragments of frustration, urgency without interest Determining interest directional by eye hmmm...that says it all to me, Dave...especially the fragments of frustration...I live them every day M M With your talent and that you seem far away from where you could take it, I can share your frustration. Dave |
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