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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-08 01:32 PM



We walked the roads we sang the songs we were the ones and with ones belonged
We talked the talk we lived the words we were the ones and with words we were heard
Now in simple traps we walk sound politics news as we now are no longer ours
We walk alone with desire knowledge energy for we are ours the ones
Who future dreamed of knowing nothing of a future but trust and paying for the future

Now ours are few our deeds vanished our memories of nothing

As we lose ours

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1 posted 2005-04-08 01:37 PM


"We walked the roads we sang the songs we were the ones and with ones belonged"


I liked this
sounds like something that would be sung...

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-04-08 01:48 PM


Everyone believes the world will never end and they are all that matters

One of the biggest arguments for not having Politicians

Thanks

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3 posted 2005-04-08 04:58 PM


agreed!
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