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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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0 posted 2005-04-07 05:17 PM

When winter turned into spring,
As when winter cradles spring,
Yet to come,
Yet to change the season
Into reason

When winter has gone,
Into morning dawn
Yet we see time has come,
For spring,
See all the beauty of spring
And find out yourself,
How beautiful spring is?

When winter cradles spring
Knowing today is the right time,
For spring to come,
Yet we still want the light
To come in our next morning

As the spring comes,
All the flowers starts to bloom,
And all the gloom gone
To the darknees,

Yet the sunlight shone,
Into this beauty of spring,
And many more days,
Will show you the path,
To its life,

This is springtime to smile,
About
Yet so many flowers changes,
Into colors,
When winter cradles spring,

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-07 05:47 PM

"When winter cradles spring,"

This is such a lovely thought for the base of this poem Vandanna, I truly enjoyed this so very much!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-04-07 05:58 PM

How very lovely Vandana!
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2005-04-07 06:38 PM

this is really beautiful!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-04-07 07:51 PM

This is springtime to smile,
About

ours is just starting...I have my first daffodil~~love your title

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-08 04:59 PM

wonderful! yes!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2005-04-09 04:53 AM

Most precious writing..you let the breath of spring into you and conveyed it to us the reader most gently and uniquely...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2005-04-09 07:36 AM

"As the spring comes,
All the flowers starts to bloom,
And all the gloom gone"

"all the gloom gone, yes...:-)

But as gloomy as winter is, it gives rest.
Just think of the work it takes to make a flower.

We must let the earth work and make joyous sounds when it displays the fruit of its effort.

Now is the time for that joyous sound to be heard, and it is given voice by this poem....

enjoyed
---------ice
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freewheelin
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since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

8 posted 2005-04-09 10:38 AM

"Yet so many flowers changes,
Into colors,
When winter cradles spring,"

awesome write

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-04-09 10:56 AM

Vandana, this is one of your best, ever.
The growth in your writing is seen,
and better yet?

Felt.

Wonderful poem, little one.

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

10 posted 2005-04-09 04:13 PM

Very lovely. I'm especially fond of spring. I'm writing my happiest, brightest poems because of spring and its effect on me. This had quite the affect on me as well. Quite enjoyed it.
Thanks...

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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