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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-07 11:48 AM



Loneliness creeps in,
the warmth of surrounding arms lacking
just as the height of body,
looking down upon me.

A mind reaching
far into the depths of memory
needing a moment or two
of cornering those feelings.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2005-04-07 11:52 AM


"A mind reaching
far into the depths of memory
needing a moment or two"

ah and here I am having too many of those moments

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-04-07 11:53 AM


Loneliness creeps in,
the warmth of surrounding arms lacking

a hard moment of truth, hopefully to pass
as fast as it came to light

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-04-07 11:56 AM



Sadelite
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4 posted 2005-04-07 11:34 PM


Loneliness creeps in,
the warmth of surrounding arms lacking
just as the height of body,
looking down upon me.


At one time, I knew that feeling verrry well.  Are you sure you're not my twin?

                 sadie  

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5 posted 2005-04-08 12:36 PM


*feeling this*
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2005-04-09 10:11 AM


Susan...moments like that sometimes last too long


Michele...everything passes eventuallyme to light

Donna...thanks  
  
Sadie, don't think you are my twin. I only had one sister

Dixie...I knew you would feel this.  

M

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2005-04-16 06:15 AM


This one just leaves me here with a sigh!!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2005-04-16 09:04 AM


m...like the new pic...you ARE a beauty
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2005-04-16 09:10 AM


Thank you Helen...that is me
on a good day

M

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
10 posted 2005-04-16 08:36 PM


You and I, both!

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (04-16-2005 10:01 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2005-04-17 07:56 AM


Hi Sue...we just have to keep plodding along...we are both due you know

hugs
M

DavePage
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12 posted 2005-04-17 06:25 PM


You write some really good stuff

Dave

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13 posted 2005-04-17 11:21 PM


Short and to the point. Very nice.
Foxyoasis
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14 posted 2005-04-18 11:53 PM


very heartful i know this feeling as well.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


LeeJ
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15 posted 2005-04-19 09:54 AM


and it is those memories, which keep us adrift with an invisible compass...well needed glorious memories....
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
16 posted 2005-04-19 10:48 AM


Understanding this very well and sending heart hugs your way.
Love the new pic!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
17 posted 2005-04-19 01:53 PM


well..I am surprised at the many nice comments...know that I appreciate them all.
And if I sometimes take my time in responding..."things" are beginning to get busy for me and taking up my time in a good way

Thanks again

M

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