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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-04-07 10:04 AM



Unwanted
Unannounced
A sadness
Fills the room

Suddenly
A great letting down

And one wonders
In an absence of her

What is the purpose
Of it all


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1 posted 2005-04-07 02:08 PM


Yes... one does... even on Thursdays. *S*

This is one I'll enjoy pondering. *S*

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-08 03:47 AM


yeah I wonder
adagio
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Marrero, La.
3 posted 2005-04-08 12:33 PM


...fills the room? mine could fill the superdome


Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-01 12:14 PM


right!!!
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