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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-04-07 08:39 AM


I wish I could paint
the pain away for you
in colors of joy and love
so vibrant and true,

but I can only be
from a distance, near
to hold you closely
and catch your tears.

I'll gather them up
then water the ground
that it may bring new growth
until you find
    that you are found.

Never to be forgotten
the power of three
but cherished deep
are sweet memories.

Hold them close
when life would feel all wrong
and hear the beauty
of you singing  your  song.

If I could, I would
paint smiles for you
in colors of red
with no shades of blue..

but,
for now,

I'll just say
that we love you.


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-04-07 08:41 AM



You personalized
unity, m'dear...

she will treasure this.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-04-07 09:17 AM


I know this will help her to heal Donna.
A lovely gifted friend you are.
Heart Hugs.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-04-07 10:41 AM


Lovingly written Donna. Hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-04-07 11:51 AM


perfect
you've embraced her with this heartsong

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2005-04-08 05:18 AM


Under compassion in the dictionary it says your name Donna...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Sadelite
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6 posted 2005-04-08 08:30 AM


Gentle Spirits,
   I really identify with what you say-I'd, too, paint the hurt away.  Lovely you.  Lovely Serenity.  

   sadie

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-04-08 09:01 AM


Very sweet Donna!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

adagio
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8 posted 2005-04-08 12:55 PM


maybe some day you will write one for me

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2005-04-09 09:09 AM


hey sweetie...

sorry I'm late. I took some time for family and a garden and well, alright, I was going to bake a cake but I figured "why push it?"



you really are a gentle spirit and I appreciate this, your prayers, and your comfort more than I can properly yet express.

thank you

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-04-09 09:42 AM


I thank you each and

Karen,
I just wish I could do more but like I told you hon, time...     and as for apologizing,  don't...never needed.

Be with them, love them, treasure them,  and send pics of the beautiful
garden that grows for you..  
you truly are special K.

passing shadows
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11 posted 2005-04-09 05:27 PM


very touching
indeed

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