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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-04-07 07:54 AM


I made for you pet name tattoos
out of warm water words
and left them under the stones

in the room with dark walls
yes there is a window
on the shadowed side

and the watchers are always there
to applaud and gasp perhaps
but then there are the rewards

of white ropes and satin
and the man of dragons
that pants to heal your wounds

if you should ever fall
wide legged sedulous
into your hearts calling

from a fenced seat prospective
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-07 08:12 AM


of white ropes and satin
and the man of dragons
that pants to heal your wounds


liked the way you unfolded each verse before this, but this...was indeed kindly and compassionate....

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-04-07 08:25 AM


Talk about reasons
for getting off the fence...

quote:
I made for you pet name tattoos
out of warm water words
and left them under the stones

invitations will be RSVP'd...
I'm sure...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
3 posted 2005-04-07 08:58 AM


always a pleasure to find your words...

love&light,
**babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-07 09:00 AM


before I even click
I know I'm gonna smile...

and I was right.  

MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
5 posted 2005-04-07 09:05 AM



  thanks

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-04-07 12:02 PM


Mmmmmmmmm - dark - in the room of shadows where the plum of night speaks in sinsual whispers - I have four words for you -

  Morning luv - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

7 posted 2005-04-11 04:22 PM


wide-eyed and legged
with nothing but your tattoos
pressed against my skin

pet names seep
with glacier melt intent
down by-roads of distraction

until the currency of words
loses its' value
in your warm water sighs.

Indigo


vandana
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8 posted 2005-04-11 07:31 PM


good one
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
9 posted 2005-04-11 08:37 PM


Quite mysterious, dark stranger!


Corinne

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