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The Embrace
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The Embrace |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Embrace I love to touch embrace her face Within my mind of rose and lace I would the atom of this Eve I would the Eden I believe These are the bells that ring my mind This is the church that I would find This is the phantom of my goal This is the spirit of my soul She lives in fantasy and seem She is the all within my dream She is the song within my heart She is the echo and the start To me she is pure poignancy The agony and ecstasy The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love to touch embrace her face Within my mind of rose and lace I would the atom of this Eve I would the Eden I believe These are the bells that ring my mind This is the church that I would find ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She is the echo and the start ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sy, Sy *SIGH* there are so many cool lines in this...I cant help but smile at your wile.  I love the symbolism and personifi in this cadence kissed romantic declaration. Within my mind of rose and lace oh and what an Eden it tis. The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one and that couplet is cooler than I have words for. I do so love the way your mind blooms. *S* *ww*    It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this embrace of yours to her, is a wealth beyond any imagination...this is what blooms flowers and smiles rainbows... Lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah how lovely this is Sy! Your lady love will be pleased with this beauty. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Seymour !! Hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like the symbolism in this poem; this is well written too! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Seymour, what a delight to read. Your heart is as fresh as dew in the morning sun. Truly beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a wonderful Springy write  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my goodness it's been too long since I've read you... this is wonderful Seymour |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sy, your poems are always such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing them. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
You paint her so beautifully, Sy. sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I love the way you pick the creams out of the box of chocolates. LOL WW LeeJ You are a love, have a happy friday. Nancy, Thank you sweet. Chris, Thank you love. Hugs. WindWalker Thank you so much. Margherita You are a love. passing, Thank you sweet. SEA So nice to see you here, thank you. SmartChick Thank you my dear. sadie Thank you so much. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
lucky you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio Thank you. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"To me she is pure poignancy The agony and ecstasy The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight" very nice! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki Thank you so much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I came looking for a Spring bouquet of beauty ... and I found it~ 'She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight' *smiles* ... just last evening I watched the fireflies dance the lawn~ *HUGLETS* to you and your lady~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a sweetheart. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sweet Sonneteer! Your spirit is, well, ~ full of spirit!  The body may age, but the vitality and beauty of the you of you, will be forever young!  A lovely read from lovely you! Love & Light, EA  |
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