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Open Poetry #35
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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 101
0 posted 2005-04-06 08:22 PM

I found myself staring into nothing,
Wondering if or when you would come back to me.
I didnt want to feel the way i did,
But like a rose blooming, the feeling was hypnotizing.

Its as if you were my porpose of existence,
And without you my world would self-destruct.
I could feel myself loosing contol,
Wanting to stop but unwanting to let go of you.

So the challenge was set for a new begining,
A begining consisting of happiness.
Its amazing what you can achieve when you try,
With a proud smile a can now look the mirror in the eye.
© Copyright 2005 Sun of faith - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-04-06 09:33 PM

A celebration is certainly due.
Happy feelings wash over me in reading your thoughts here.
TD
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-04-08 06:54 PM

Well done...needs another round of applause.
TD
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-04-08 08:39 PM

good for you!
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