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gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2005-04-06 02:53 PM



Agate
you have won me sunshine, captured in the glitter
of your insides


In moonlight
we have washed you clean
to die another day for me
in cancerous rays

...polished...

there could be no cold
in the heart of your dimensions
for you are I
and I am you

Agate
upon the sill
you have won me back, from cloudless
to bathe amongst them

and float.



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-04-06 03:00 PM


This shines upon the sill so perfectly Gemma!
Outstanding.

Enchantress
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Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-06 03:29 PM


So perfectly and delicately beautiful!!
So good to read you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2005-04-06 04:06 PM


sheer grace. an elegant write that captures the mood perfectly
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2005-04-06 04:18 PM


Oh and i am going to have to agree with "the Raph"

Magnificent Gemma girl

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-04-06 04:46 PM


Gemma, you write beyond your years ~ both in content and in form!

You have, and are, something very special.

Hugs with love,
Linda


Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
6 posted 2005-04-06 06:23 PM


*smile*

twofer.

You make for one beautiful sill sitter.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
7 posted 2005-04-07 12:07 PM


a Gem of sparkling proportions ...

        . . .  priceless!  

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2005-04-07 05:50 PM


I agree with all the above..lovely writing

M

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2005-04-08 02:51 AM


Beautifully done, dear Gem..


and nice picture, too.

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2005-04-08 03:33 AM


oh gemma

love this and your pic

Goldenrose
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11 posted 2005-04-08 05:10 AM


Lovely...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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