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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-05 10:51 PM



If Can, Can
If No Can, No Can


Not knowing the
exact moment that
I realized I wanted
her around me
the rest of my life,
but realizing that
it takes two caring
hearts to fit love
together nice and tight,
I know that I can
love her with all
of my heart if she
wants to share
our lives.

JamesLee
April04
2005

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netsky
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since 2005-03-29
Posts 148
Miami
1 posted 2005-04-06 01:06 AM


uncanned hearts of human palms?

I think she must hold your hand for this good poem.

thanks- a healthy love is yours--- I think so!


reid

majnu
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2 posted 2005-04-26 12:23 PM


nice

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-26 07:19 AM


enjoyed
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-04-26 05:08 PM


Go for it James or remember it or remember to write about it

Nice words

Dave

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