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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-04-05 08:48 AM


See me.
       All of me.
Not just the outside,
but what lies within.
Descry intricacy of thought
mixed with contrast of heart;

the ups and downs
highs and lows,
laughter and tears
joys and woes.

Completely composed
in a package
of imperfect,
I am one
of many parts;

a vital composition
that truly starts
past the surface
under the skin
       the core of my soul
        is where I begin.


I may not always
think like you
or see things from
your point of view,

still,         I see
with open mind;
look much deeper
so that you might find

       me, the all of me.

I am not so different
from you,     or you.
I'll never be perfect
and that's the truth;

I feel love
and I feel pain,
and I have stood
in   God's   healing   rain.

I am, who I am
in all of my    complexity,
and I shall never want     for more
than for you to see    me.


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-04-05 08:53 AM



It's so simple...

they only make it difficult.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-05 09:04 AM


"I feel love
and I feel pain,
and I have stood
in   God's   healing   rain.

I am, who I am
in all of my    complexity,
and I shall never want     for more
than for you to see    me."

Right on...yes, it is that simple, and yet,
they make it so complex.
Hugs to you pretty lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-04-05 09:25 AM


both...

thank you....

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2005-04-05 10:35 AM


"See me.
       All of me.
Not just the outside,
but what lies within."

Perfection Donna!!!

Bravo!!!  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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5 posted 2005-04-05 02:33 PM


Susan, you gift me with a wonderful feeling and a smile...thank you.  Hugs atcha gal...

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

6 posted 2005-04-06 05:43 AM


This is very good Donna...it is an invitation to see the real you..the core...i am sure there is great depth waiting to be discovered...well done here..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-04-06 02:14 PM


Thank you very much Phil, I appreciate that.
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