Too Much To Consider Reasonable

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Open Poetry #35

Too Much To Consider Reasonable

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-04-05 08:26 AM

Too Much To Consider Reasonable

unashamed I had spoken
that whisper in the wind
should I have tried redirection
demanded an unfold of tangle
for there it was going nowhere
spoken lingering balancing upon air
just a remnant of something
you wouldn’t recognize anyway
did I overbid my desires
and expect it actual hope
in thinking out of view
too much to consider reasonable
who made up the rules that
awful things happen to the good
and good things find the awful
I sometimes wish that I
was desensitized to color
so I could truly understand
the black and white
for I am not past the ache
but at least I can now sleep

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-05 08:55 AM

just a remnant of something
you wouldn’t recognize anyway
did I overbid my desires
and expect it actual hope
in thinking out of view
too much to consider reasonable
who made up the rule

perfection topped with this...

for I am not past the ache
but at least I can now sleep

Yep, this one says so very much Helen,
and I feel it/live it with you...

I see such strength in your words gal.
Hugs to you.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2005-04-05 11:52 AM

always so intricate, like a necklace fashioned by a master artisan.

nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2005-04-05 03:51 PM

I sometimes wish that I
was desensitized to color
so I could truly understand
the black and white

This is excellent... I don't understand the rules, either. *S*

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