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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-05 07:43 AM

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Walking Rainbows

I’ve walked on rainbows several times
In paintings and in poetry rhymes
But never have I found a vend
That took me to the very end.

I’ve tried and tried in false and true
To paint a portrait true of you
But never have I found in store
That absolute that is your core

Veil on veil I’ve torn away
Yet still another cloak would stay.
Each moment turned to something new.
Beyond a clue in witless view

Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery
A golden haze with fires core
That burns and holds my soul in awe.

And so this fired torch remains
And my fantasy still reigns.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-04-05 08:26 AM

And so this fired torch remains
---------------------------------

and so this moth will still fly in your flame. *L*

Sy-babers...your rhymes ARE the rainbows end.

It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-04-05 08:57 AM

I’ve tried and tried in false and true
To paint a portrait true of you
But never have I found in store
That absolute that is your core
oh damn Sey, I am relating to this one today...

yanno? You are pure poetic rhyming perfections dear!!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-05 08:57 AM

Such a beautiful write dear Sy!
It is a joy each morning to read your wonderful rhymes.
This one is extra special.
~Morning hugs,....and tea, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-04-05 10:38 AM

Beautiful write to match a beautiful spring day! hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-04-05 01:39 PM

Veil on veil I’ve torn away
Yet still another cloak would stay.
Each moment turned to something new.
Beyond a clue in witless view

Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery
A golden haze with fires core
That burns and holds my soul in awe.

~*~

So on this beach I do beseech
an understanding of what we seek
when looking through the veil of mist
a golden light ... a lover's kiss...

You smooth talker, you!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-04-05 02:41 PM

Mr. T., your poem was magical.

I am sending you a magnificent rainbow for you to walk on! Mind you, you have to share it my Care Bear friend! He's as sweet and cuddly as you are!

Love & Rainbow Light,
EA

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-04-05 04:03 PM

This is simply beautiful, my friend... *S*

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2005-04-05 05:03 PM

love it...but I think I will try walking a rainbow myself and see where it ends...

M

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2005-04-05 06:21 PM

Stunning Sy!

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2005-04-05 06:55 PM

Now c'mere you fiery cuddlebear...

You delight my heart, sy.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

11 posted 2005-04-05 07:17 PM

"the absolute core is you, Sy!" A core of passion and hope--

sadie

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2005-04-05 07:36 PM

JM,
You always say the right thing, love it
*ww*

Gentle,
Love you too.

Nancy,
Hugs back always.

Chris,
You are a dear.

Sunshine
You will always be my sunshine.

Earth Angel
Thank you and I'll be careful. Hugs

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2005-04-05 10:06 PM

suthern
Thank you sweety.

Maureen,
Good idea,

Marti,
Hugs back.

serenity,
And you delight mine.

sadie,
A delightful comment.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2005-04-06 12:07 PM

Simply beautiful, Sy. As always.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2005-04-06 07:50 AM

SmartChick
Thank you dear.

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