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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-04-05 02:00 AM



I softly knocked on your door —
you greeted me with wine
and the sound of gypsy music.
I accepted the drink, unaware
of its addicting intoxication —
for your own vintage was the wine
— from your lips...to mine.

CG

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2005-04-05 02:09 AM


Unaware... that's the best kind of vintage!


Enjoyed the bouquet, CG~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-04-05 03:44 AM


I enjoyed the sweet wine of your words!


EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-04-05 05:21 AM


Nice...James
CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2005-04-05 12:08 PM


Thank you for the words of appreciation.

Yes, sometimes “unaware” is the best; sometimes great things happen, when not expected, not sought after......

CG

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