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Open Poetry #35

dance my way out.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-04-04 11:15 PM

there's this breeze
that seems to find me
where ever i go
it whips past my face
and whispers in my ear
tells me to move on
take nothing
leave nothing
move on
i'm conscience
and aware
and dance my way out of lives
just to be placed in new ones
'till the breeze asks once more
for me to dance away
and i will
take nothing
leave ~~nothing~~ everything.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-04-04 11:40 PM

dancing on the breeze...cool imagery

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2005-04-05 02:20 AM

I especially liked your title as well as the words you you left behind.

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