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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-04 04:38 PM



Pain the headache of pain
surrounds me as my world is
crashing in front of me

love is lost words are spoken
empty meanings without care
or intentions of making things
right

shallow hallow is what I feel
engulf me in this sea of lonesome
that I feel. I just want to go away
to another day just not be me

I just want to be happy for it
can't be people keep on going
hurting me

the reason is yet unknowth to me
all i know is my tears are shed my
head is dead and my soul inside is
crushed.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-04 07:58 PM


Reading this made me think of why do I feel I cant do things I have been doing for years.

Maybe not the words you wrote but the meaning that made me think of a car, alone, and drive for a thousand mile.

Dave

majnu
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SF Bay Area
2 posted 2005-04-05 11:50 AM


depressing but too often how i feel. nice

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-04-05 12:50 PM


thanks guy's

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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