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Open Poetry #35
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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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Belgium
0 posted 2005-04-04 03:55 PM


Each time I see you
I slowly fall
further and further
into an abyss...
... I believe most people call it
love...

Don't promiss me
you'll be there
to catch me
when I hit the ground
... Others will...

Simply hold my hand
while we're falling...
trying to enjoy what we have,
exploring together
And maybe proving
that bottemless pitts
do exist.
... Or is that just a fairytale?...
© Copyright 2005 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-04-05 12:51 PM

I enjoyed this falling scene, hope you never reach bottom.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2005-04-05 02:14 AM

Free falling is rather liberating,
so long as we don't look down!!!

Nice write, zenny~
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-05 04:09 AM

nice
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