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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2005-04-04 05:52 AM


"Inner" Thoughts

I stand corrected, brushing the wrinkles
skirting my surroundings.
Eyes burning, back to solitude,
contemplating the morning's kiss.

The wind before me, whipping the mind
to thoughts of fantasy, to captivating the shadows
as the skies held darkening moments
threatening to take our breaths away.

Age, just a number to tease the inside out,
surface seeking acceptance, and the rain
on the verge of snow, raising the blush,
cheek chilling to spiral my day
into one of mixed reviews.

Reality fills the empty space, a gentle push
for the mildness of tomorrow and here I am,
passing on the rainy days
and a Monday, once again,
thinking about you...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-04 06:05 AM


rainy days and mondays

lol

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-04-04 06:11 AM


laughing with you...Dixie.
You do know my craft business is called Rainy Days 'N Mondays  *s ( I use that  a lot...)

hugs ( now I am going back for a catnap)
M

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