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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-02 09:41 AM



In a surge it comes,
like the pump of air,
filling things deflated,

it trickles rainlike,
off a leaky pipe
and pours within the pores,

a hand of fingers
that spread the answer
within the tightened glove,

the ink between the dotted lines,
casting color on blank pages,

just when you thought you were alive,
you realize you were dead
and now your draw your first breath,

the newborn's 'look at me' cry.

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-04-02 12:25 PM


"it trickles rainlike,
off a leaky pipe
and pours within the pores,

a hand of fingers
that spread the answer
within the tightened glove,"

Awesome images...wonderful write Michele.
Much enjoyed the read as always.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-04-02 12:39 PM


Love this Michelle -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-02 10:03 PM


dang girl! write on!
bklynboy
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florida
4 posted 2005-04-03 04:08 PM


Touching....hard and fast
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-04-03 04:39 PM


I always enjoy the way you colour the page

mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-04-03 07:24 PM


nodding in agreement
inspiration is like that raindrop trickle

Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
7 posted 2005-04-03 07:54 PM


yep!     just like dat
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