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Open Poetry #35

recollections

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

0 posted 2005-04-01 10:18 AM

recollections

recollections
feel absolute
but they are not

fact and fiction
of love and lust
blend false with time

emotions mix
jagged pieces
of past events

lasting passions
carve strong pathways
deep in one's head

yet memories
never capture
like a camera

instead the mind
simulates life
creating an
impressionistic painting

Janette

Note: carved from my poem "Alchemy"

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-04-01 11:32 AM

This is very cute. I loved it.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-01 05:51 PM

indeed it does

wonderful write
good to see you again

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2005-04-02 01:29 AM

So good to see your work again. Much enjoyed, thank you!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-02 02:37 AM

Nice writing Janette...James

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2005-04-02 03:47 AM

Enjoyed this....thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-04-02 07:54 AM

instead the mind
simulates life
creating an
impressionistic painting

yes that is it exacrly, Janette...

M

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