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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2005-04-01 09:18 AM






Another Nite Passes
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

Hazy memories swirling in the
gauzy mists of long ago.
Fleeting images of horse-drawn
buggy swiftly wending its way down
the litter-strewn streets.
The stillness of the night is broken
by the furious pounding of hooves
upon the cobblestones.
Clop, clop. Clop, clop. Clop, clop...
Sounds that forever echo in the
recesses of my unsettled mind.
Putrid scents assail my nose as the hot,
summer's night gives rise to the
putrefaction of refuse and human waste
that cover the lane ways.
Lamplights are dim and far between,
offering little illumination
to light up the way.
Contents of belly threaten to spew
with the violent rocking of the caleche.
There is a tangible sense of urgency.
We must hurry!
Faster! Faster!
Faster!...

Why?
Where?
Who?
When?

***

...another night passes by,
but still no answers...

© Copyright 2005 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-04-01 09:32 AM


Earth Angel
A lovely why, enjoyed.

Janette
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2 posted 2005-04-01 10:34 AM


"Clop, clop. Clop, clop. Clop, clop...
Sounds that forever echo in the
recesses of my unsettled mind."

I hear them this day, too.

Greatly enjoyed this read.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-04-01 11:50 AM


i often wonder whos driving who?
made me think here

vandana
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4 posted 2005-04-01 11:50 AM


nice write
Susan
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5 posted 2005-04-02 12:55 PM


I was taken upon an unexpected ride by this - it makes a great metaphor -

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-04-02 10:06 PM


Mr. T. ~

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I suppose it was more enjoyable to read it than to have dreamt it ~ or lived it! lol

Sweet Dreams!

EA

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-04-02 10:08 PM


Hi, Janette! It was good to hear from you! Long time no see!

Yes, that clop clopping has a way of staying with me ~ from one lifetime to the next!


EA

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8 posted 2005-04-02 10:09 PM


Goddess ~

Yes, you are the phyllum of Goddesses that are not only beautiful ~ but they think! lol

Love & God/dess Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2005-04-02 10:10 PM


vandana ~

Thank you, mountain flower!


EA

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2005-04-02 10:11 PM


Susan ~

As the saying goes, "Always keep them guessing!" ~ I do believe that should be a motto of yours! lol


Linda

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