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Huan Yi
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Damp
Cold
Rain
The weather’s unfaithful
To April

The masts
Of ships
Have no sails
Tied up to docks in the harbor

The fog horn sound
Seems lost itself
Barren limbs
On wind blown trees

Just when I think
There’ll be no poem—
A flight of sparrows
Thunders by
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sweetcollege_girl
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1 posted 04-01-2005 08:34 AM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

Very nice Huan..the "Fool" part of the poem was subliminal yet noticeable...i think... Very nice
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2 posted 04-01-2005 07:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

The fog horn sound
Seems lost itself

This poem has such aural appeal... I love the mood these lines convey... and the ending of thundering sparrows! *S*
passing shadows
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I always enjoy you
RMW
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Very nicely done. Nothing lends itself to poetry like the sea. Excellent. Bob
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Haun Yi

A poet's senses should always be open in case a poem flies by.  Yours obviously are.  Enjoyed this!!
Drauntz
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" I can only be fooled once. the second time I fool you"
 
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