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Continuous Heart To Heart
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Continuous Heart To Heart |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Continuous Heart To Heart Loving feelings are mutual All the moments we fill We have never met Perhaps we never will We found dreams to share Aglow on silver moons Hearts are in accord Hearing favourite tunes Though we are miles apart Distanced by the sea A love flows between Hearts beat in harmony The sharing of a friendship Over passages of time Glowing day and night Hearts continue to shine Going beyond the horizons On oceans without end Love flows in devotions We reach friend to friend Hope©2005 |
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Jessie Carstein Junior Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 41 |
This was a nice piece, heart felt and enjoyable. The rhyme scheme was excellent and while the imagery was quite shallow it was also very fitting, nice work |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"friend to friend" a nice feeling isn't it Hope.  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A very positive concept in life, and fearlessness to love...an invisible balance between activity and passivity, existing there where you meet... |
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