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Altered Travel

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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Altered Travel

before
you have laid your head
on threads of pine
now they just blow
in the tender breeze
and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes
I hear them in the distance
chatting to my mind
where there is a time
that can stand still
it is in the path of changing
and you find you can stay

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart


© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
majnu
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1 posted 04-01-2005 12:09 AM       View Profile for majnu   Email majnu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for majnu

wonderful.


and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes


so damn obvious but i have never heard or read anything similar - and not to toot my horn too much but I am pretty well read for my age.

-majnu
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2 posted 04-01-2005 02:17 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I am hearing wind chimes, feeling a gentle breeze. Nicely done!
passing shadows
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lovely scene
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


4 posted 07-22-2013 11:49 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

And now she is one with the wind that chimes...
I'm running with that thought and will always remember her when.....

I wish I had told her how special she was.
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 07-23-2013 12:05 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

She touched so many of us....and i will never forget her.
 
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