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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-03-31 11:36 PM



Altered Travel

before
you have laid your head
on threads of pine
now they just blow
in the tender breeze
and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes
I hear them in the distance
chatting to my mind
where there is a time
that can stand still
it is in the path of changing
and you find you can stay

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
majnu
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1 posted 2005-04-01 12:09 PM


wonderful.


and playing in that wind
birds are natural chimes


so damn obvious but i have never heard or read anything similar - and not to toot my horn too much but I am pretty well read for my age.

-majnu
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-04-01 02:17 AM


I am hearing wind chimes, feeling a gentle breeze. Nicely done!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-01 08:34 PM


lovely scene
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2013-07-22 11:49 PM


And now she is one with the wind that chimes...
I'm running with that thought and will always remember her when.....

I wish I had told her how special she was.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2013-07-23 12:05 PM


She touched so many of us....and i will never forget her.
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