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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-03-31 11:25 PM

Tight Sleep

stars go through the darkness
running with scissors
cutting out pieces here and there
leaving holes in a stubborn sky
but I am not afraid to drift
for you say you dream
of me with a fever
and I recognize
the face of the moon

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2005-04-01 12:10 PM

smiling as i reply, i don't know what to say.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2005-04-01 10:41 AM

"just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart"

Please keep "cutting," this piece is superb.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-01 08:00 PM

cool!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2005-04-02 01:26 PM

hugs red

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2005-04-02 03:02 PM

This is good. It's much like the
first poem of yours I read which keeps
me watching for others.
I like when you don’t get
in the way of the Eternal Feminine
in you.

John

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-04-02 05:28 PM

Your words still give me shivers Helen.
hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2005-04-02 06:30 PM

stars go through the darkness
running with scissors
cutting out pieces here and there
leaving holes in a stubborn sky

how cool is that image and personifi....
once again I say....I wish I had wrote this.

and this....

and I recognize
the face of the moon

Ive always envied those who could create so much with so few words...my muse is long winded....
another beautiful write poetess helen.

It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away.

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