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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-03-31 08:44 PM


About Doubt

It's hard to trust
when you can't believe.
It's hard to believe
when you've known
one too many failures.
It's easy to fail when
doubts and fears seem
to tell the story
of your life.

I'm not really this
doubtful, this fearful,
or am I?

If only dreams could
come true and me and you
could lay all of our
doubts by the wayside.

That would be a beautiful
day, but I doubt if I'll
ever see that day, as
long as I have this
thing about doubts.

JamesLee
March31
2005

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-03-31 09:34 PM


James

You know what?  Doubt is a very human thing...I sure do my share of it....and especially when it comes to relationships...I hope all your dreams come true.  

majnu
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2 posted 2005-04-01 12:15 PM


only too true my friend.
well done

-majnu
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LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-04-01 07:42 AM


do you have this thing about doubt, or does doubt have you?  We can talk ourselves into believing anything...harmony flows where our minds go..."we are the sailers"....
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-04-01 07:50 AM


James,
As was said doubt is a self insight.
But I have no doubts about the write.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-04-01 08:37 AM


Everyone has doubts m'friend,
it's very human.
Well said..
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Janette
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6 posted 2005-04-01 09:14 AM


"It's easy to fail when
doubts and fears ..."

But then regrets can be even worse.

Thought provoking read here....enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

vandana
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7 posted 2005-04-01 11:52 AM


good read
passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-04-01 07:58 PM


understood
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