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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-03-31 08:23 PM


I'd Give The World To You


What if I dropped every woman
except you, because I thought
that you were the one and no one
else but you would ever do.
And what if you weren't the
one I thought you were and
you didn't come through.
Then what would I do?

What else could I do?
You are worth the risk.
I'd give the World to you.


JamesLee
March31
2005
What if she didn't believe
I was worth the risk,
and acted accordingly.
How long until I leave her.
How long should I grieve her.

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suthern
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1 posted 2005-04-01 07:20 PM


To gain everything, you sometimes have to risk everything... If it turns out she's not the one, you start over... as painful as that will undoubtedly be. But if she is the one... she may need to see how much she matters... may not realize that she does matter when she only sees you surrounded by others. *S*
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-01 07:59 PM


no pain, no gain
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-04-02 02:22 AM


Thank you southern and passing shadows for the nice words...
Not so much I'm surrounded by others, but they don't seem to matter anymore...James

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2005-04-02 07:50 AM


But if she is the one... she may need to see how much she matters... may not realize that she does matter when she only sees you surrounded by others.

know and understand this feeling, JM

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