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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2005-03-31 08:10 AM



when the sun was woman
and the day was her device,
her metal toy
with amber gems
and her fingers strummed
the gypsy side of her soul

the winds spoke laughter then
and they moved her gown
with their prayers
they were puppy children
with big feet friendly
jumping to become trees

I folded shadows there
between and before
the tomorrows came
and they smelled like you
before I knew your eyes
and how they closed

when the gifts of our mouths
were exchanged with damp receipts
and we touched the edges
with the hollows of our soul
between and before
our hands were just enough

to sooth our dawn day sins
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-31 08:13 AM


the winds spoke laughter then
and they moved her gown
with their prayers
they were puppy children
with big feet friendly
jumping to become trees


warm smiles and hugs for this...forgiveness, understanding and allowance are sorely deficient among us...thank you for this...especially this morning, you've touched another heart....

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-03-31 08:30 AM


mmm, I hear flutes...


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-03-31 12:11 PM


I fall into your words - into the feel of your mind thought world - and my gypsy lines dance - this is wonderful D -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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