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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-03-31 06:49 AM




images
fragments
of emotions
indistinct thoughts

dressed in naught
they move
silently
beyond the eye

they make for themselves
a garden by the sea
a grove
an orchard
of cool shades

summer
with it’s peaches
autumn
whose colors
praise desire

from sunrise to sunset
how softly the years
still quietly play—
on notes of light
the tunes they loved



© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-31 06:53 AM


this so reminds me of a time in my life...thank you for this beautiful music....
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since 1999-07-29
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2 posted 2005-03-31 11:42 AM


This is so lovely... and ends in soft perfection. *S*
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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3 posted 2005-03-31 12:04 PM


way cool John!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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