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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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You are darkness in my night. I am a Raven airborne in your carmine sky. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i love you for using carmine. it is too long since i've seen that word. -majnu |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
this makes me want to sit you down on the couch with me at my favorite cafe so that i can tell you face to face how much i love this! seriously hon, my absolute favorite by you!!! so good to see the continued growth in you and your writing. keep impressing me. (and now that the comment is longer than the poem, i'll go to bed) S~ "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling, as I agree with majnu...enjoy that colorful word, carmine... |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Phil, I know you submitted others for WildChild, but, I have say, again, that this is by far one of your best and I am using it for April's edition. :-) Snow "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Wild Child Publishing "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you everyone who replied... Snow.... thank you so much for your input with this poem...now maybe more people will see my work and i could not ask for any more than that...i think it is what makes us write in the first place..to reach out through our work and share it with others...and you have helped me to do that so i thank you very much.... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
outstanding and very much deserving to be in Wild Child! Well done. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Vandana..thank you for your words.. Goldenrose. Donna...your words are sea jewels.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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