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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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In the streets of tenderness there is still the joy of leaves that have dried into an orchestra waiting for a child to write the lyrics -------- with thanks to Sunshine for the link of inspiration for my muse here: /pip/Forum92/HTML/001229.html |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know very well, my dear, that this last left me dancing with the leaves... thank you! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I can see that child....today's and the one in the memory that's so old it's like a dog-eared picture of a dream....there, that one -- in pigtails. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Martie! hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah so beautiful Martie!! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
as only the world of child, young or old can |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
there is still the joy of leaves that have dried into an orchestra Absolutely beautiful! I love the thought of music in the rustle. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie this is so very beautiful! You are so gifted in your writing! Lovely.  I really want to care, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Martie, This is such a joy to read....SO blissful, so free the child in you who dances among the leaves, who can feel tenderness in streets....~Paul |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one has left me with a smile!  "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
it's beautiful, I am listening to it right now ....you always make me smile and melt Martie. a  Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
In the playgrounds of the mind we only wear adulthood as our costumes *wink* |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a wonderful heartwrite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
another ripened fruit falls into the eager hands of the hungered souls nice pruning Martie  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Leaves...crinkled after a long fall...I hear the voice of them within me, reading this. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Only you Martie!!! I love what you do with a short verse. It's like picking a bouquet of wildflowers that come perfectly arranged! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - I read and I marvel again and again - you are terrific - Paul |
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