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Huan Yi
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0 posted 03-30-2005 04:28 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


With a long gaze
The past looks back
And says goodbye
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-30-2005 04:59 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Nothing like a little slap
of history in the face
to wake us up.

Excellent work, John.
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2 posted 03-30-2005 10:27 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader


  the rented rearview
                              posts a note
                   "objects in mirror are
                                            closer than they seem"



....from a very old poem of mine -- at least it seems very old unless I look at the actual amount of time that's passed....
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on the threshold of a dream


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And if we forget...

I like this very much!!
Huan Yi
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Thanks everyone.

RL, That's a very good poem  . . .

John
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the big bang.
 
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