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Open Poetry #35

A Place to Stem

Dautz Write
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 96

0 posted 2005-03-30 02:09 PM

after wiggled feet on satin sheet and embodied by an arm
a mind still wanders for its vase through cracks of porcelain time

a place to stem
a ways to be
Mind over body enlightened free
to wander thoughts of mental breeze
tickling words fanning leaves;
to hike upon a gentle hill, hand
in hand while Depth so spills
far from bed this place


Henceforth
muffled dreams the wade of mental lovers
far from vase--
a ways to be, but free in reel;
a place to stem
for minds to seal
   porcelain cracks of time.

[This message has been edited by Dautz Write (03-30-2005 10:25 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2005-03-30 02:29 PM

Henceforth muffled dreams the wade of mental lovers
far from vase--
a ways to be, but free in reel
a place to stem
for minds to spill
  of porcelain cracks to fill

I am so impressed!  Excellent poem Dautz Write.  *applause*

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2005-03-30 02:31 PM

ah, romance is alive and well! *applauding*
great write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-03-30 02:38 PM

Dautz, I have missed you...

welcome home, and thank you
for the pretty!

Dautz Write
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 96

4 posted 2005-03-30 02:39 PM

Thanks, Ladies for your kindness. It's good to be back.

Dautz

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-03-30 11:49 PM

Impressive DW...
a resonance speaks here.
TD

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