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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-03-30 11:07 AM



It all began with intent

kill the weeds
tame the soils
alter the topography
challenge the skies

to suit the selfish
controlling cries
of two legged beasts

remodel the Earth

as if man's designs
were superior
to those of a master sculptor

but then again, perhaps

‘twas all the while
the reality
this globe was
haphazardly thrown together
in the first place?
and it’s always been
a dog-eat-dog
god-forsaken world?

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-30 01:08 PM


Deep thoughts to ponder Kacy.
Well written piece. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
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2 posted 2005-03-30 01:18 PM


Midnitesun
What is, is and what will be, will be.
Enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2005-03-30 07:25 PM


We are the weeds . . .

BBC News Release:
Global Decline

and we are blind to the beautiful planet that we are destroying.

The only species known to have the capacity to care about it, but unable to do so.  What a shame.

glider

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4 posted 2005-03-30 07:34 PM


Kacy

Thought filled you are....and you know what?  Some weeds have always been my favorite flowers!  

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5 posted 2005-03-30 07:57 PM


Flowers, flowers everywhere ~ and so are the weeds! Variety is the spice of 'life'!

Enjoyed your splashes of thought!


Linda

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6 posted 2005-03-30 08:41 PM


Good thought, for I wonder which is better man's increating dominance over nature or nature's peace and tranquility.
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7 posted 2005-03-30 10:04 PM


We're scavengers and ragpickers, slovenly builders and casual destroyers.......created in the image.....

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8 posted 2005-03-30 10:40 PM


Thanks to each of you for reading and commenting. My intent with this write was to focus not only on our careless handling of the physical Earth, but our collective carelessness in respecting the sanctity of Life in general. I have always believed we must care for the weakest of us, the 'weeds' and the ones often overlooked in the animal as well as the plant kingdom. It seems we often fail to protect anyone but the strongest, and for this, we shall all pay a price some day. I found I could barely address such heady issues in this one post, so I ended up leaving the focal point our disregard for the physical Earth.
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