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Open Poetry #35

Twinight [repost for Spring...]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-03-30 10:29 AM

Twinight

How can I leave you…
I have watched o’er you this day
Saw the smiling laughter glitter
Golden in the touch of hand
To child’s hair,

Glimpsed upon an eye, spying
Curve of hip, not slender
Yesterday’s form but the
Soft flow of tomorrows
Yet to come

Saw a hand stroking a sleeve,
Enjoying yet again the
Story of one hundred
Hearings and more, waiting
For the chuckle at the end

I saw a dream lay down
In the grass, eyes skyward,
Hope floating
On plans of future success
All within a grasp of get

I saw a bend of waist
Over toys and remnants,
Hurrying, scurrying toward
That rush of wait, wait
Today’s almost gone…

And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…

~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
3 March 2002

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-04-2005 08:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-03-30 10:39 AM

Sunshine,
the weigh you have with words!
sadie

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-30 10:41 AM

"And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…"

Wonderful write Karilea..
Hugs~N

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-03-30 10:48 AM

beautiful

a beautiful way to celebrate a month that is nearly gone again

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4 posted 2005-04-04 01:57 PM

Oh....I almost missed this...

so glad I didn't!!!

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-04-04 04:30 PM

If I ever forget the "why of poetry"...this would remind me.

Eric

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California

6 posted 2005-04-04 06:56 PM

Sissie

and now you got me singing..."together at last at twilight time" Loved that song, and your poem!

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