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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Training My horse was trained as well to fly To the saddle, bit and the sigh And carries me a good ways cast Those burning embers of the past Sometimes it takes the strangest course More like a dragon then a horse It snorts the heat and burning fire Those that light the hearts desire It searches in the morning’s dew And wonders on the rainbows hue It travels in the canyons sprawl And climbed the mountains of Nepal It takes me to the minds abyss And back to heaven on a kiss I stay the saddle ride my time Taste the sweet and tart of lime And when its time for our depart I’ll leave the essence of my art |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think your horse is more a Unicorn...as magical as you make each day begin! Good Wednesday morning, Sy-shine!    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Fly you and your family up to PA why dontcha? I pictured a magnificant unicorn as well...visioning all life on earth since the beginning of time... what a journey, first thing in the morning? and before my first cup of coffee????? Hugs to ya |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this goes well with the morning nicely done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning sunshine.  LeeJ Good morning sweety and big hugs to you. passing Have a good sleep and nice dreams. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sey..a fine poem here.....brilliantly rhymed as usual..thank you... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! May I take a ride also on that magical horse? What a wonderful way to start the day with a fantasy so real I was ready to pack my bags and fly. Thank you Sy for this beauty. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And when its time for our depart I’ll leave the essence of my art" yes!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Come fly with me and bring the tea. Susan, Yes, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whoa Nellie!! Wait for me!! I'm coming with my sister And her tea!!  Wonderful write Seymour. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, I would never leave you behind. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, The horse and dragon have swept me away with the color and brilliance of their rhyme! A pleasure to read! sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sadie, A pleasure to have you read and comment, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Rainbow morning, Sir Sigh! Would your unicorn like to fly with my unicorn to the ends of heaven's rainbow?   Love & Rainbow Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, I'd love it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Giddy-up, my friend!!!! *S* Sometimes, you just have to let them take the reins... and hang on for the ride. *S* Excellent write!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent ride! I mean write!! JL  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You're right you know. JL, Thanks for the excellent. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I have to admit I came for the title -- I'm finishing off a book chapter on that subject this evening -- but I stayed for an excellent poem. Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader Thank you my friend. |
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