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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-03-30 05:58 AM

Between in Stall

A spirit rises and must also fall
allowing the hidden inside to call
and press on the outside what bruised once was all.
Here to be caught, in the netted of stall.

As the cold begins dwindling, the sun offers new.
A heart passed the lonely, the sky in the blue.
Those clouds designed forming, bathed in the view
of the dancing below, in the sheerness for you.

It is time that proposes and marries the share,
if only those wishes met eyes in their stare.
In voice of the many, in reach of declare
"Loving begins of the self, in repair."

Words are suspended, in shadows of stead.
Alone in the distance, releasing the dread.
Erasing those voices, inside of this head,
and returning to dreamthoughts, to warmth of my bed.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-30 07:43 AM

smiling at you

I think I might go back to bed too

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-30 08:04 AM

It is time that proposes and marries the share,
if only those wishes met eyes in their stare.
In voice of the many, in reach of declare
"Loving begins of the self, in repair."

Awesome!!!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-03-30 08:08 AM

Maureen,
A delight to read this morning.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2005-03-30 08:14 AM

Enjoyed reading M..

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-03-30 09:18 AM

Well done M!

The sun is shining, time to get out of that bed and take a walk on the beach.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2005-03-31 08:26 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2005-03-31 09:42 AM

Beautiful, Maureen. I always appreciate the poignant, honest self-scrutiny that you bring to your verse. In your own reflections, you give me pause for self-reflection Thank you

~Paul

Dautz Write
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 96

8 posted 2005-03-31 10:28 AM

You write "between the stall" well...

DW

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2005-03-31 12:01 PM

Dix...I enjoy going back to bed when I am forced to get up so early..darn cat!!!

LeeJ...I am trying to move forward...sometimes I am rather sluggish at it. *s thanks

SY...good to see you each morning

Phil...I appreciate your kind responses, Thank you.

Susan... if a beach was only close enough, or if my Mother still lived in Florida~~ will have to wait until summer...

Bernie...hope all is going well with your move

M

Paul...I am pleased that my words are felt by you. I am a rather overly sensitive individual and sometimes I think maybe I feel too much.
Thank you for reading me

Dautz Write..love your name and yes..I am in that stall mode right now...trying to push the envelope a bit.
Thank you *s

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