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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-30 02:14 AM


While Hearts Apart

"I thought if my heart stopped beating it wouldn't
hurt so much."...from the movie Hitch.

Today I realized
that you were gone.

You found someone
that you liked
better than me
and you moved on.

Now I don't know
what I'm going
to do.

It's hard to let
go of someone
(you care for)
before you're
through.

JamesLee
March30
2005
Broken Heart Series
Just thoughts,
not situations,
after watching
HITCH.

© Copyright 2005 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
1 posted 2005-03-30 02:23 AM


this is so true good write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-03-30 02:31 AM


I absolutely loved the movie "Hitch".

Good to know that this is just part of your "Broken Heart Series" and not a reflection of your reality.

Aloha hugs,
EA

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2005-03-30 04:05 AM


Not seen the movie , but one thing I know , its so hard letting go

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-30 07:53 AM


yeah
I agree

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2005-03-30 07:56 AM


James,
They come and go, you never know.

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