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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-30 01:58 AM


An Hour Went By


I was looking into
my honeys eyes,
seemed like an
hour went by.

I was admiring her
so much, I didn't
know what to say.
I just wanted to
keep looking, until
she kissed me and
blew me away.

We held hands
while we were
admiring the
silky moonlight.
Thank God, for
her and tonite.


JamesLee
March30
2005

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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
1 posted 2005-03-30 01:59 AM


wonderfully written so beautiful

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2005-03-30 02:22 AM


Nice out tonight!  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-03-30 07:54 AM


smiling at you
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