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0 posted 2005-03-29 10:03 PM



~*~

Beyond voice perceptively trickles touch
In cohesive measurement that lays feeling to feeling
Time must stop to part the waves that curl and fold within
When words cease in their tidal blunder, leaving wet the need
For all that is silent is said, and all that gathers is heard
And all that is wanted and welcome ripples ‘neath the palm

Copyright Kkh 03/29/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-29 10:13 PM



And bless you for this smooth touch, Kathryn...

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2 posted 2005-03-29 10:28 PM


For all that is silent is said, and all that gathers is heard
And all that is wanted and welcome ripples ‘neath the palm

For all that is silently said is gathered,
and once in the fold, is heard..

Well done dearest friend.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-03-29 10:56 PM


~*~

Beyond voice perceptively trickles touch
In cohesive measurement that lays feeling to feeling
Time must stop to part the waves that curl and fold within
When words cease in their tidal blunder, leaving wet the need
For all that is silent is said, and all that gathers is heard
And all that is wanted and welcome ripples ‘neath the palm


the subtlet tone of the foam
rising above from the towering wave
************************************
liked your touch here


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4 posted 2005-03-29 10:57 PM


This is Great, well written too: it tuoched my heart!
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