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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
# 83 The noise is loud, and I am shaken. Why do You not quieten it? I am inconceiveably small, and You know this. How much am I expected to grow in so little time? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
He does not ask of us what is impossible. The plaintive voice of one so small is endearing.   EA |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
profound, much is said without saying much at all, always impressed by those who can do that , take care New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like this a lot. Reminds me very much of the Bible passage where a couple disciples are in the boat and a storm starts. Jesus is asleep and they wake him up panicked and he calms the storm then says "Where was your faith?" Gonna keep this. It's a prayer of sorts, which I've said many times before... but you give it better words then me  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did you get an answer? It's good that we have to keep stretching ourselves. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I know that feeling. I like this poem alot Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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