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Angels ask |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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O, breathe in love, or breathe out, let me choke on lack of air, Roses turn from red to black- like the hourglass, revives from ashes, reborn back to a youthful beautiful sight, Feel a special moment out of time- breathing thy world into mine creating anew peaceful paradise. Forbid my lips and hands of touch, Doth thou halt for the waiting? eyes shall tell the locking of the minds- as our spirits dance together forming a never breaking bond, These dreams of thee most haunting- without thou knowledge i have dreamt a dream of thee, picturing an occuring nightly joy. O, so far it seems since last we spoke, But memories keep thee close, A angel ask's for a moment alone- but purest beauty fails to succeed as i'm stuck to thee, only thee my love, |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
Beautiful. NightFall xxx The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this fine writing....James |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that's a very tender write. i like the way i felt when i read this. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very touching!!!!  Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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