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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-03-29 05:03 PM



Don't speak.

Let silence gather to
your tongue.

Don't touch...

Yet trace my lips in
distance.

Words fail and fingers lie.

Don't believe beyond
this -

In silence...I hear
you.

And in distance...your reach is
my caress.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-29 05:14 PM


Don't believe beyond
this -

~*~

For this moment

held in silence

is thunderous

inside.

GG
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2 posted 2005-03-29 05:17 PM


Yes... exactly.

This is
just right.


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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3 posted 2005-03-29 05:22 PM


"And in distance...your reach is
my caress."

Beautiful as always Eric!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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4 posted 2005-03-29 05:49 PM


I have to echo GG... for as I read those last lines... I whispered "yes". *S*

Beautiful work!

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