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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2005-03-29 10:04 AM


I  have  not  yet
nor will  I  fall.
Did you really think
that    yours
was the only name
upon which I could call?

You have underestimated me
it's clear now that it's true
but hey,    that's ok baby
cuz there's more to me
than you.


{and it's only befitting that Jodee is playing
on the radio as I type...     }


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-03-29 10:10 AM


Keep that thought!

Smiling here!


Linda

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-03-29 10:17 AM


Ditto!!!!!

Your an encouragement to all who reads

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-03-29 10:35 AM


actually truth is I'm just a weak lil thing trying to stay brave....  

thanks gals...


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2005-03-29 10:42 AM


So, you met my ex?

strength begets strength and we are being watched.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-03-29 10:46 AM



Smiling with you...
'atta girl!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2005-03-29 12:35 PM


Oh gawd, I know all about trying to be brave,

.....lest we stumble and fall.

And you're right, there is so much more!!!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2005-03-29 02:51 PM


you said it!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-03-29 02:53 PM


Gleeee....Way to go girlfriend!!!!
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

9 posted 2005-03-29 04:53 PM


Powerful!

Eric

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