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Pinellas Park Sobbing
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Pinellas Park Sobbing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Pinellas Park's Darkest Days Sorrow rapes like a predator Playing with fire Walk inside my prison Heaping glass into a million shards Scrawling, bloodstained jabbing Abduction with a name Nobody knows…nobody knows Having it’s way with you…. Shaking spears of boney fingers Withering dawn of hopelessness Comes forth like a grudge Vaudeville madness scales the coffee shops Searching for the holiest day Thrown to the ocean’s, apocalypse Festering scratches, budding cheap motels Sacrament of communion clings to violation Designer fragrance, is all they smell Cheap letters stuffed in bottles The faucet drips… Drips Drips Drips Inhumane… Laughing off the Bedsores of humanity Like an innocent silhouette Aging regret, bleeding profusely Slavery weds infidelity To one’s own soul Starving, thirsting, mankind’s salvation DNA learns everything a country already knows Passing down “Bursting Tears" For Terri Shiavo |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this, Lee... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eloquently and compassionately expressed.  Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I can see your heart in this write Lee J. Beautiful write. JL |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful language...deeply and powerfuly expressed. Eric |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
To step from saving life to allowing death....a serious consideration. To step from allowing death for pity's sake, to causing death for mere convenience....a greater tragedy for us, than for her. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
" walk inside my prison"... ~full of anguish~ ***tremendous, tremendous scribe*** **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bravo Lee.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A perfect title for this anguished cry... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you Lee. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And the anguish intensifies for their family as the 11th Circuit has just now again denied the family a de novo review of the findings of fact in the previous trials. I pray God's comfort for them at this time. May it comfort them also to know that the hearts of all of us are breaking with theirs. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
too sad how her life became a tug of war for the spectators thanks for this |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Lee, You cut right to the bone, then to the marrow! Moving powerful writing [as usual] Thank you for waking me up!!! ~Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Terrie has passed on, God willing she will know of the plight for her survival from all who believed she should not be taken from this earth...and God bless those to, that thought she should have....perhaps, something good will come from her loss, but at this particular point in time...perhaps it will be hard to identify..... Hugs to all of you and yours and many thanks for reading |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The hardship of one took many into the struggle for life at any cost; I hope, too, that we will someday have an answer for something that has put fear into everyone's mind... all I can say is, thank God I have my directives in order. |
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