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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-03-29 08:51 AM


I'm a big girl now, so go right ahead and mess with me,
but I'm giving you fair warning, you better let the others be.
If you want to play, we will begin to indulge in this game,
but first let me introduce myself by another name.

You haven't met her yet because I've kept her locked inside
but it's time for her to join in and go along for the ride.
You need taught a little lesson, yes babe I know it's true
I believe that what you need is a gigantic dose of "YOU."

I'll teach lessons on the things that you've been dishing out,
but I will do it more subtely, I have no need to scream and shout.
So please say hello to the other side of me, I call her the "Ice Queen"
Baby you best get ready, cuz the likes of her you have never seen!

I can gaurantee that you won't forget this chicks name
and that when she's through with you; You will NEVER be the same!
I'm just going to sit back and let my friend, the ice queen rule....
and baby I will watch as this icey lady makes you DROOL!


revised and reposted 3-29-05(for my own personal sanity...)


How do you
like me now?  Toby...

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-03-29 08:54 AM


WHOOOHOOOO!!!!  YOU GO GIRL!!!  

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-03-29 08:55 AM


Thanks Nancy, I just really needed to revise this for myself today....
thanks for tolerating me hon!  Hugs.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-03-29 08:56 AM


ohhh man, I hear the Rocky song plain in the backgroud...and shakin like a leaf...

oh honorable Queen, have pity on my worthless soul...(while bowing)

hehehehhe, loved this....it and you are a keeper...

say, would you play on my soccor team?  We'd love ta have ya...

Big smiles

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-29 08:59 AM


excuse my slight attitude Lee....really...

but you do make me smile hon, thank you.  Hugs

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5 posted 2005-03-29 09:39 AM


Wow -- this one makes me wanna howl at the moon! Intense!

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6 posted 2005-03-29 09:41 AM


I AM WOMAN HEAR ME ROAR !!!!
hugging you lady, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-03-29 09:46 AM


thank you both for your indulgences whilst I ramble on....
Hugs.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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8 posted 2005-03-29 11:54 AM


;-) makes me send a knowing wink and smirk.

like this one a lot hon. the power is defitnatly felt

hugs..
snowy

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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9 posted 2005-03-29 05:46 PM


This is great!!! Could you send some of that gumption this way??? Pretty please? *S*
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2005-03-29 11:03 PM


for your own sanity

is right;
i understand and second your notion

sometimes the claws just gotta come out of
hibernation

Sadelite
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11 posted 2005-03-30 10:29 AM


Even gentle spirits have their limit!  Enjoyed this immensely!  Ah, but to assume a different name and course of action!  

     sadie

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12 posted 2005-08-10 04:25 PM


smiling wide...... you Go girlfriend!!

show em who's BOSS!

Bella

A great write.

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

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