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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-29 07:16 AM

there is snow in the eyes
of the wind
the ground makes soft regret
that fits the feet
when the quiet ones walk

I have rubbed the dark stones
they are worn drums
with scars
that moan as wolf thoughts
from their soul place

the promise of tomorrows
is bound in leather
it is woman without water
and the cold hand men
feed her air for food

they hid her god
under layers of lie trees
then burned them
when she rested
now they offer her perfume

from the smoking deception

_______________

Dark (scribblenote..rest in peace terri..I too, as the others have heard the chanting of your soul, please forgive us our inhumanity)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-29 07:41 AM

sincerely felt

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-03-29 07:43 AM

gawd DS, you move me with this.
Heart hugs.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-03-29 08:23 AM

May she rest soon,
and be at peace
after all this time...

Thank you, DS...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-03-29 09:36 AM

Let us never, ever forget.

An excellent poem DS...worthy in its own right and as an expression of the truth in this situation, peerless.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-03-29 10:52 AM

DS

A lovely heart you have, my friend!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-03-29 01:19 PM

Your heart is showing, and I so enjoyed seeing through it.
It's your best side, you know.

Loved the tender mercy, DS~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-03-29 05:47 PM

I don't even have words... hear my tears.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

8 posted 2005-03-30 08:44 AM

*** feeling this ***

~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2005-03-30 09:12 AM

dang...

Mr. D.

*kiss*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

10 posted 2005-03-30 10:40 AM

soul pain...
you write the words of our tears...

love you, D

K

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2005-03-30 04:04 PM

There's so much beauty in this one. I love the way you use language.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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