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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 101


0 posted 2005-03-28 11:25 PM


So strong knowing im so weak,
Can I break this moments chain?
Feeling so helpless in a never ending unknown,
Knowing I just dont know.
Being held in a place,
Where all I can find is questions,
When all I want is one simple awnser.
I shall be my own angel
Standing strong on my own shoulder,
Screaming to get up!
For it is usless fo me to stay down any longer,

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Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
1 posted 2005-03-28 11:40 PM


Sometimes the questions are far more important and necessary than the answers...And far superior to false confidence generated by wrong answers.  Yep!
I'd get up anyway.  The answers sometimes come...sometimes soon enough.

Til then...there is a lot of wisdom in knowing that you don't know.  You're not alone.  Most of us don't know and we find out what we can.

Enjoyed your write because I have felt the agony of my own ignorance and indecision.

Shenachie

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-03-29 07:32 AM


Liked your write here.
There is strength in the ability to question ourselves...in tenderness and in the willingness to know.  When you are ready,
get up. We all know what our knees are for.
Thanks for sharing this.
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-29 07:47 AM


spent many hours, days, minutes, running around trying to find answers...but it was when I didn't try anymore, to push the issue, that some answers came, some never do...and one can interfer with one's path if we spend to much time trying...

well done!

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